Excellent in many important areas
I really appreciated the comic-book look of this animation; it gave it a certain uniqueness, compounded by the original design of the main character (or is he not your own and I've just never seen him before?). Sound was not lacking in the least. I also felt that the animation was well-paced. It was slow, in a sense, but the suspense kept it flowing without a loss of interest. I see this as a very promising series, and you as a very promising Flash author. I'll keep an eye out for your work whenever I can.
Is Dr. Shroud your character?